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Lovely Last Lines

I was recently reading a poem by Mary Oliver entitled “In Blackwater Woods.” Here is the poem in full. I want to focus on the sublime closing lines. I don’t really have much to say about them, other than that they are beautiful, full of easy grace, and a sterling example of why I love poetry. (For some reason I cannot provide spaces between the lines, so I’ll indicate stanza breaks in a more cumbersome fashion.)

. . . .

To live in this world

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you must be able

to do three things:

to love what is mortal;

to hold it

[break]

against your bones knowing

your own life depends on it;

and, when the time comes to let it go,

to let it go.

September 13, 2009 - 5:28 PM No Comments

“Of Mere Being”

I promised you some poetry readings — this is a favorite short poem of mine, and this is why I think it’s so nifty — awhile back. I’m going to get started on this shortlist with Wallace Stevens’ “Of Mere Being.” 

 

The palm at the end of the mind,

Beyond the last thought, rises

In the bronze decor,

 

A gold-feathered bird

Sings in the palm, without human meaning,

Without human feeling, a foreign song.

 

You know then that it is not the reason

That makes us happy or unhappy.

The bird sings. Its feathers shine.

 

The palm stands on the edge of space. 

The wind moves slowly in the branches. 

The bird’s fire-fangled feathers dangle down. 

 

Yep, this is a kooky late Wallace Stevens poem. He died in 1955, and this was probably written in the last year or two of his life. It appears as the last poem in the lovely volume of selected poetry called *The Palm at the End of the Mind*, and — given the title of the volume and the location of this poem at the very end — I’ve always enjoyed the silly idea that this was the last poem he ever wrote. 

This is a quintessential Wallace Stevens poem. Many of the identifiable characteristics are there. Totally abstract? Check. Relatively simple language that seems to gesture toward something profound yet perhaps ultimately mysterious or even ungraspable? Check. Use of birds and/or vegetation as a main object in the poem? Check. 

I adore the opening of this poem: “The palm at the end of the mind, / Beyond the last thought, rises / In the bronze decor.” We’re chucked off the end of the pier and into the lake; we can’t really swim. The poem is asking us to think of a place “[b]eyond the last thought”; this could be a cheap parlor trick, but in hands as accomplished as Stevens, it certainly isn’t. The riveting part about this opening, though, is its quiet confidence. Stevens will often just tell you these marvelous things. No “imagine this!” or scenes of grandiose imagery and highfalutin language. Two super-abstract ideas (palm at end of mind AND beyond the last thought) are brought together with a super-active verb: “rises.” Somehow these abstract ideas are taking hold. This scene might seem ridiculous, but that’s our problem; the speaker states it as if he’s stating a fact.

There’s this bird singing a “foreign song,” that seems to escape our categories of comprehension. Singing birds are a favorite of poets — think of Keats’ “Ode to a Nightingale” or the bird in the tree at the end of Yeats’ “Sailing to Byzantium” — and here Stevens takes this image of natural beautiful and harmony and makes it bizarre, different, other. In a masterful early poem, “Sunday Morning,” Stevens ends with scene of the world as alive and bountiful but ultimately divorced from human comprehension and meaning. The famous pigeons swooping downward to darkness on extended wings — the last lines of the poem — reappear here, sort of. In both cases there’s something haunting about these birds: they don’t need us, not at all. The birds of “Sunday Morning” are of this world; the “gold-feathered bird” here is emphatically not. 

Then comes a patented Stevens stunner: “You know then that it is not the reason / That makes us happy or unhappy.” What the hell does that mean? It seems portentous, yet its meaning remains unclear. What is the most important word in that first quoted line? I can think of a few candidates: You, know, then, it, is, not, the, reason. That’s every word except “that,” folks. Lean heavily on any one of those words and you can change the reading of the line. Try it. To my mind, “it,” “not,” and “reason” are probably the three most important. “It” — what’s it? “Not” — if we don’t know “it,” this causes even more trouble by gesturing to an idea or space that is NOT “it.” “Reason” — talk about a dicey term, since it links up with logic, causal relationships, and a whole system of ways that humans make sense of their world. This line remains obdurate and opaque. And I like it for that. At one point Hamlet tells Horatio “There’s nothing good or bad but thinking makes it so.” I think the first two lines of the third stanza kinda-sorta get at that idea. But Hamlet is explicitly talking about how the mind constructs the world, whereas that only may be the case here. There’s definitely a mind-world dance going on in “Of Mere Being,” but in Hamlet’s formulation the boundaries are crisp and clear, and here they are quite blurry. And, if this wasn’t enough, don’t forget that we’ve been addressed directly: “You know then. . .” Suddenly, within this atmosphere of uncertainty come two taut sentences: “The bird sings. Its feathers shine.” For some reason — there’s that word again — I find these lines incredibly moving. The bird remains, singing, shining. Wipe away all that baggage, all those categories, all that understanding, because there the bird is, singing and shining, and its going to do that whether or not you want to accept it. Two quick sentences gesture toward volumes of marvelousness. 

We end with three 8-beat lines, each a complete sentence. So we’re at the end of mind, beyond the last thought, but only at the edge of space? Um, ok. (The use of the verb “stands,” though, is provocative; what does it stand on, and how is it related to the “bronze decor” that appears in line 1?) Line 1 establishes some location but keeps it static. Line 2 adds movement — the wind in the branches. Line 3 offers the sublime payoff: “The bird’s fire-fangled feathers dangle down.” Here’s some alliterative ecstasy. Doing lexical work on alliteration — that repeated letter or sound must mean that — is always dubious and slightly crazy, but: the F sounds like a burning fire (try it — it’s open and continuous) and the hard chop of the D sounds closes off the expansive Fs. “Fangled” by the way, only has one entry in the *OED*: the last recorded use is in 1727, and it means “characterized by crochets or fopperies.” Well, I suppose there is something foppish about this bird. Stevens may have known about this obsolete word — it wouldn’t surprise me — but it hardly matters either way. As wacky as this line is, it somehow works. This mysterious and reticent poem all of a sudden bursts forward. The image — the idea — is fantastical but obscure. Now you see it; now you don’t. It’s a helluva cool line. (And you might now see why I secretly want this to be the last poem. That last line is like how Mickey Mantle hit a homerun during his last at-bat. Both are good ways to go out.) 

April 2, 2009 - 10:00 PM No Comments

Poetry Promissory Notes

I haven’t been posting enough discussions of poems. I threw out a Rilke poem, promised more, and then never came through. So this morning I punched in a whole bunch of poems into saved blog posts. (Punching in the poems takes awhile!) So now I have material, there, staring at me, and I will write about it. Posts on these poems will slowly appear. Once the list is exhausted, a new list will be presented. I will happily take requests!

Here’s the shortlist. Get excited:

-William Shakespeare, Sonnet #129

-Hart Crane, “Voyages #1″

-Thomas Wyatt, “Whoso List to Hunt”

-William Blake, “London”

-Emily Dickinson, #258

-Philip Sidney, “Astrophil and Stella #1″

-Wallace Stevens, “Of Mere Being”

-William Shakespeare, Falstaff’s speech on honor (prose, not poetry, but cut me some slack here!)

Remember, these posting are always favorite poems of mine, and they are always reasonably short–short enough to easily read a handful of times in one sitting (as poetry ought to be read!). Maybe one special day I’ll post on a favorite longer poem, but that day won’t arrive for awhile. 

Here’s a quick twofer to tide you over. Two lovely short poems by William Blake:

“Eternity”

He who binds himself to a joy

Does the winged life destroy

But he who kisses the joy as it flies

Lives in eternity’s sun rise. 

 

“A Question Answered”

What is it men in women do require?

The lineaments of Gratified Desire.

What is it women do in men require?

The lineaments of Gratified Desire.

February 19, 2009 - 9:44 AM View Comments

“Archaic Torso of Apollo”

Occasionally I will post some poetry. But it will not be written by me–I don’t write poetry. I’ll try, from time to time, but it is a skill I simply do not possess. What I do much more often is read poetry. I make myself write poetry every so often in order to remember just how hard it is–no matter what, but especially when rhyme and meter are involved. (Seriously, sit down and try to write a Shakespearean sonnet: abab cdcd efef gg. Oh, and try to have it say something reasonably important and/or meaningful while maintaining those strictures. Ain’t easy.) 

This is all to say that I will occasionally post a favorite poem of mine. The inaugural poem post will be Rainer Maria Rilke’s “Archaic Torso of Apollo.” His stuff is just phenomenal. I consider his cycle of poems, “Duino Elegies,” to be within that small group of poetry that is simply The Best. (Those poems, though, are longer, so I won’t post them here. At least not yet.) I can’t read German, so I read the Stephen Mitchell translation, which is said to be the best out there. 

Without further ado:

 

We cannot know his legendary head

with eyes like ripening fruit. And yet his torso

is still suffused with brilliance from inside,

like a lamp, in which his gaze, now turned to low,

 

gleams in all its power. Otherwise

the curved breast could not dazzle you so, nor could 

a smile run through the placid hips and thighs

to that dark center where procreation flared.

 

Otherwise this stone would seem defaced

beneath the translucent cascade of the shoulders

and would not glisten like a wild beast’s fur:

 

would not, from all the borders of itself,

burst like a star: for here there is no place

that does not see you. You must change your life. 

 

I love the repetition of “Otherwise,” building off the “suffus[ion] with brilliance from inside, / like a lamp.” He’s talking about a statue, thinking as he stands in the presence of something ancient (even “Archaic”) and alien and probably incomplete (a “Torso” is probably not a complete David-esque statue) and yet somehow achingly beautiful, vibrant, and even menacing. That’s what I find so remarkable about this poem: it’s a glorious set piece in evocative description–a sort of poetic still-life–that, with a sharp pivot, ends with the absolutely flooring line, “You must change your life.” Standing next to greatness should not be a comfortable experience–not at all. It might be wonderful, but it should never be complacent. Moreover, the “you” breaks through the fourth wall. This is no longer an isolated poet hand-wringing in front of a statue; rather, it is a direct address, a call-to-arms. Baudelaire does the same thing in a famous passage at the end of a poem: You! Hypocrite reader! My double! My brother! Rilke’s call is like that only without the confrontational nastiness. It’s a simple statement of fact. And that’s why it’s so powerful. 

January 21, 2009 - 6:06 PM No Comments